Amparo, you work is visually appealing and both your responses are very interesting and complete. I think, however, there's still some work to do with the analysis of quotes. In many cases, you 'explain' by repeating what the quote says in other or the same words. Try to think of what they reveal/show of each character. Also, you have mainly focused on two qualities: Eddie's jealousy and Catherine's attempts to show she can make her own mind. In the case of Eddie, there is a lot more to be said. All in all you did a good job. Mark: 8 (eight)
Amparo, you work is visually appealing and both your responses are very interesting and complete.
ResponderEliminarI think, however, there's still some work to do with the analysis of quotes. In many cases, you 'explain' by repeating what the quote says in other or the same words. Try to think of what they reveal/show of each character. Also, you have mainly focused on two qualities: Eddie's jealousy and Catherine's attempts to show she can make her own mind. In the case of Eddie, there is a lot more to be said.
All in all you did a good job.
Mark: 8 (eight)